Writing:

Learn/Goal: To ensure that my writing clearly flows to guide the reader in relation to my purpose.

Reflection:

Tuesday 29 Nov 2016

Reflection of 2016:

In the history of Saint Pius X Catholic School 2016 all Terms were hard work and fun, In Term 1 testing, term 2 yr 8’s retreat , Term 3 Rainbow's End and Term 4 Camp. The most fun for me is Term 4 because at Camp we got to do activities free time we can walk anywhere anytime in the night and day but we never got payed.

But there was a problem when we went there,  1 of the girls accidentally fell off a cliff the cliff was not steep but the streaming water looked deep the girl fell in the water and was knocked out cold on a big wood branch all of the teachers and Parents told us to step back and then they tried to get her out but they couldn't so all the boys were brainy and made a wire like when we all hold each other's hands then hold on tight I was the one in front I grabbed her and I told the boys to all pull and we did Pio and Pate was pulling as hard as they can and it worked, we all gathered around and Mr Coakley ran towards us to push the girls heart and all the Water came out of her mouth and then when she was feeling alright all the boys got in trouble but we got treated with good food so whenever we eat dinner launch breakfast we eat something different/better and it was nice to eat.

As the days passed we started to get tired and homesick the day we left in the bus we were tired and started to sleep some of us, then when we got to school most of us left early and some stayed and waited until school was finished like me it was a cool experience I hope we get to do it again next year.

IF OUR PETS COULD TALK!

Learn - To use good sentences in my writing. A good sentence has a subject and a verb.
I am learning to use 3 type of sentences which is are simple sentences, compound sentences and also complex sentences.

If pets could speak it would be adorable and more helpful. If we told them what to do they would understand and would answer back, for example if we told them that they were going to have a shower then they could either refuse or accept it and say "no I wouldn't like to" or "yes I would like to".

I have a dog, he is a Golden Retriever and I named him Philip he acts so nice and adorable at times but when he sees and hears other dogs and cars go past, he barks and tries to run after them. I struggle to hold him with his lead collar, but this seems to make him choke.

I wish dogs could talk, it would be really really really supportive for me, because he would be able to help me do chores around the house.

Learning about Cybersmart

Monday 8 August 2016

Constable Gordon came to talk to Room 7 about Cybersmart.

There was a part where I was interested and worried about when he said online texting because I have been involved with online texting before. I was very impatient to find out more about online texting and I did but not much, I learnt from constable that when you send any disturbing messages and if you delete it, the people who owns the site you sent the text on will still see it and they will report it.

Narrative Writing The Trolls

Monday 25 July 2016

One day there lived two trolls, one was a girl troll, full of joy and happiness. The other troll  was a  boy who was angry and did not like to do much things. All he liked to do, was to walk around looking disappointed like an angry bird, but instead was named an angry troll.

As night came by they grabbed their blankets and cuddled up by the fire. While the boy troll was lying down, the girl troll sang a song about the stars to calm her down. But the boy troll said something to stop her from singing, “her seriously more singing” the boy troll said to her, then the girl troll replied “yes more singing”.

The boy troll liked peace and quiet at night, but since the girl troll was with him, he could not have a peaceful sleep. But as the boy troll turned around to sleep, the girl troll grabbed a guitar out of nowhere and played it. Singing and as she did, it felt magical to her because monsters shone and came out of nowhere singing with her. Then suddenly the boy troll asked if he could use the girl trolls guitar, and as she gave it to him the boy troll threw it into the fire. Then the girl troll said to him “why did you do that for! That was my only guitar!” But the boy troll did not answer he just walked on back to his bed and slept, leaving the girl troll standing there regretting that she gave her guitar to boy troll. THE END.

Holiday Writing

Monday 2 May 2016

Holiday Writing

Goal: My goal is to focus on developing my Ideas

In the holiday I went to my cousins house for 1 whole week, we played Bo3 on his Playstation 4, my cousin is a Pro at Bo3 he can trickshot quickscope hardscope and can do a 360 no scope. Bo3 stands for Black Ops 3 it is a shooting game where you can play online with other players or offline, but me and my cousin were playing offline we were versing in this map called Nuketown we were playing gun game it was fun because I actually got to beat him once but when we reversed he won because I was making him angry, anyways gun game is whenever you kill someone you get a new gun, for example every time I kill my cousin I get a new gun, everytime he kills me he gets a new gun as well so that's gun game but the reason why we did not play online was because I sucked versing other people online because as soon as I spawn I get spawn trapped but for the rest of that week me and my cousin just ate, played video games and cleaned the house.

THE END.

Evan Vanoss Fong Letter

Hulk Hogan

Scorpions

All about me Google Presentation

Why I like Music

I like music because the sound of the instruments is so cool. Also it is so fun to play. The most exciting instrument is trumpets and drums. My favourite instrument is drums because the sound is so cool and nice. First thing in music class, we might start off with singing, games or class band. But sometimes we start off with singing. We sing some songs that are high notes and some peoples songs. Then we do class band. We get to choose what instrument we want to play. Usually I pick drums but some of my classmates took over all of the drums.Then I choose guitar because I also think that instrument has a cool sound too. So I played it, and it was so so cool. My favourite singer is Bruno Mars because his songs are so so so nice and cool like the songs 'I wanna be a Billionaire' and his song 'Treasure.'